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dhandipunk 2003-08-04 at 8:17 p.m.
I know how you
feel, I just don't care
(I just would like to start by saying I hate web log style diaries- the type
that don't have a separate page for each entry. Hate. Especially if
they don't have a previous and next button. That is all.)
Layout: Oh my. That is certainly Blink 182. Like. A lot of Blink 182. Maybe.
too much Blink 182. Ok, not "maybe"- definitely. The picture you have makes
reading the text very difficult since it is set behind the entry box. So
when you start to read you go from a big but faint picture of a naked band
member to a small but clear picture of naked band member. Repeatedly. It
hurt. It really did. Then the eyes started to unnerve me a bit. (Granted,
this being unsettled could have been attributed to my lack of sleep and the
hour of the day, but I highly doubt it. The picture is awful. There, I said
it. It is awful.)
Content: "Wellll this was a boring entry, but frankly I do not care."
You may not, but readers do. They care a lot. Interest is the thing that
gets people (that you don't know/don't demand that they read) to return
and/or comment. So that one sentence is what kept repeating itself while I
read your diary. Your entries are boring (like you said). This is the most interesting thing you said in the whole site you have- "It would have
been a lot better if they midgets. or even better....*thinking*... midgets
with mullets...yes I think so." And that made me wonder why you bother.
If you do not care about the quality of your writing/diary why do you write
as if you were speaking to an audience? And then, I'm guessing you like
"Dhandi." I could be wrong. (Oh, sarcasm. I love the sarcasm.) I lost count
of how many entries mention them.
I shall give you a 70% because that layout is horrible. Really. Although the
links that you have work and are organized, you are lacking some that will
make navigation of your diary a whole lot easier. Then, that picture has got
to go. Really.
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