Content: When you finally open up, you were interesting. But most of what you write/wrote is/was very useless and pointless and all through the entriesI kept asking myself why does she have an online diary if a) she has "an offline" one and b) says nothing of importance. ever? Because your entries are more like "notes to self" or little post it reminders. They rarely exceed three hundred words- one hundred even (to give a random number/example). It was very pointless to read as many as I did. They have no substance most of the time. Really, they are very mundane, trivial. And this is particularly bad for you because sometimes your most powerful messages are one sentence long. So these get lost in your mess of lower case letters and half baked ideas.Perfect example- This is utterly pointless. Really. You don't need to tell people that you are online in your diary. That's like saying, "I'm awake," every time you walk up to someone. Then, your grammar. Oh no. your grammar. Learn the correct usages of good and well. It will stop the nervous ticking people will have when they read. Also, check your spelling.

Layout-gets. 90%(?) The pink is a bit... pink, but the overall layout fits

perfectly.

Reviewed By: Katie