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lindseyjtjtk
2003-08-07 at 6:31 a.m.

I'm movin' on.

Layout- Very pleased. Your layout is very organized. Nothing is out of place. I like that. A lot. I found everything easily; there were no errors. But I really don't think that picture really goes with what you write. That picture almost implies at first impression insight and deepness. Your writing is very shallow (wait for more on this) like a thimble as compared to a say, a swimming pool.

Content- You write about your day. Who did this, what went on then, etc. You explain thoroughly (enough) so that the reader isn't lost. But this gets boring. Quickly- making each day seem to drag on. This could have been just a side effect from reading so many in such a short period. Really. It could have. But that's what a new reader will do. And if they feel the same way I do now, they won't come back. Humor is a good thing. Try it. (Or at least, more of it.)

I will give you a 88%. You have a (very) nice layout. But it doesn't fit what you write (mostly).

Reviewed by: Katie

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